"The Charmer": a short-short AI story, by K.M. Berrios
- KORBAN BOOKS
- Feb 21, 2025
- 5 min read
In a quaint neighborhood filled with laughter and the rustling of leaves, an unusual romance began to blossom. Sarah, a vibrant woman with big dreams, had been seen entwined in a romantic web spun by a charming man named Jeremy. Would his true nature be anything but sweet?
Unbeknownst to Sarah, her heart was about to collide with a deep, dark force that promised never to leave.
Sarah was sharp, captivating, and full of life. When Jeremy moved in next door, he quickly captured her attention with his quick wit and charisma. However, those around him felt something unsettling. Walter, a neighbor with a watchful eye, sensed that beneath Jeremy’s charming exterior lay a darker essence. Why? Well, Walter had a secret. But it was not anyone's business; just his own.
Though Jeremy was, indeed, sweet at times, he was quick to change tempers, when things didn't go his way. He also had an unusual fixation with cereals, often selecting only artisanal brands. "Promised crisp freshness!" he would point firmly at the label, when he went shopping with Sarah. "Oh... Okay."
"Well... Crispness is the secret to well-being," he would laugh.
He also carried an obsessive love for red apples, often claiming they could enhance mental clarity and that they helped him see better. "I thought that was carrots," Sarah would say. "No. Apples. The redder... the better."
While these quirks intrigued Sarah, they only deepened Walter's suspicions. His concerns turned restless, propelled by passages from Holy Scripture highlighting the deceptive nature of evil. So, one day, as Sarah took out her garbage, in his fervor, he warned her: “For such men are false apostles, deceitful workmen, disguising themselves as fellows of Christ.” He urged Sarah to tread carefully, but she brushed off his concerns. "Love can conquer all doubts."
Then one evening, after a seemingly perfect night with Jeremy, Sarah returned home to a chilling scene. Disturbing noises reverberated through her once-peaceful residence, strange odors lingered in the air, and dark dreams disrupted her sleep. An unsettling feeling enveloped her, as if a malevolent presence was encroaching upon her very being.
"What is happening?" she asked herself, in tears, when days went by and the eerie manifestations had not gone. But while she was aghast and in turmoil, Jeremy seemed to enjoy both the ghostly apparitions and her stress. "The noise in the kitchen? That's Bob. He died when his tutu caught on fire."
"Jeremy! It's not funny!"
"Dear. Have another apple."
Desperate, Sarah recalled Walter's warnings and sought comfort in her dusty Bible, its pages filled with wisdom and strength. She waited for Jeremy to leave, since, as she had recently learned, he wasn't much of a Bible guy. "I know every word. I just don't like reading it."
She read the verses aloud. A gentle warmth surrounded her, slowly dispelling the darkness that had plagued her home.

With each piece of Scripture, Sarah's courage grew. This resurgence of faith diminished the grip of fear surrounding her. That night marked a significant change; for the first time in weeks, she fell asleep peacefully, embraced by the protective light of God's words.
The next day, things were different.
Her phone rang. It was Jeremy. "Hi, Jeremy."
"What happened to 'honey'?"
Well, she was starting to realize that he was not that sweet, after all. "Sorry, I'm just so busy with getting all my workstuff together."
"Can I come by for a cup of coffee? I'll take you to work."
"Uh--It's okay. I already have everything I need, and it's getting late. Maybe another day."
Jeremy sensed the shift in Sarah. He knew that she and Walter were "neighborhood friendly," and he didn't like it one bit. "An angel in disguise, are we?" Jeremy whistled to the air and let out a sigh. So aware was he that Walter’s influence might be thwarting his hold on her, that he prepared a dinner for two. "I won't take no for an answer," he chimed over the phone.
Sarah couldn't find a perfect excuse. As she prepared for the meal, emotional turmoil brewed inside her, clashing with the newfound clarity her faith provided. But she didn't have to fear anymore. God was already in the room.
During dinner, as Jeremy attempted to woo her with his charm, an electric tension filled the air. Oddly enough, his demeanor began to flicker, revealing flashes of something sinister beneath his polished surface. Sarah’s heart raced as she recognized the darkness right before her eyes. She remembered Walter and all of his warnings.
"Sarah, are you listening to me?" Jeremy's voice became louder.
In that pivotal moment, she clung to the realization that God's love was a powerful weapon against evil. Drawing from that strength, she recited, “Submit yourselves, then, to God. Resist the devil, and he will flee from you!” Her voice rang with conviction, each word creating a protective barrier around her.
As Sarah spoke, the very air shifted. Jeremy’s charm waned, shadows recoiling from her light. The truth about his identity became painfully clear, revealing the demon lurking within him, desperate to reclaim the control he thought he had. "Sarah...!" he cried out as he lunged towards her.
Gathering her courage, Sarah declared, “Get behind me, Satan!” As she invoked this divine power, waves of light cascaded around her, forcing the demon to shriek in defeat. The veil of darkness dissipated, leaving Sarah breathless but triumphant.
Jeremy was taken into custody police for assault and dating abuse. He claimed temporary insanity and was locked up for two months, in a crisis response facility. Later, the community learned that he had done the same thing to other women who had lived in the vicinity of their neighborhood. "We better lock our doors," one elderly neighbor said.
In the aftermath, surrounded by the warmth of her newfound faith, Sarah understood the true meaning of Walter's Scriptures. Love, when anchored in God, illuminates the darkest paths. She forged a strong bond with Walter, who was more of a guardian than anyone could tell. "Tell me the truth. Jeremy was a demon. Are you an angel?"
"A vigilant protector," he told her. "I am committed to safeguarding not just the interests of men, but their soul as well."
It turned out that Walter was studying to be a priest.
Sarah embraced her faith with renewed fervor. Guided by a new light of life, she shared her testimony widely. She taught others about the strength of faith and love. She taught them about listening to wise neighbors who knew the Word of God. She taught them to be careful about who they dated. But most of all, she taught them that believing in Christ can outshine even the most deceptive darkness.
The End
Sarah's transformative experience portrays the timeless battle between light and darkness. Though she was not very learned in the Word, through steadfast faith, she triumphed over evil. Her story serves as a powerful reminder: love rooted in evil fails the mark, but faith possesses the strength to conquer the most daunting adversaries and illuminate even the darkest corners of life.
May Sarah’s experience inspire everyone to approach love with an open heart yet a discerning spirit. True wisdom lies in faith, offering guidance to navigate shadows and uncover hidden truths beneath the surface.
Shalom, Shalom!


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